Where I Spent November

November 30, 2011 at 2:05 am (Books, Fiction) (, , , , , , )

November is almost over, and with it, this thing called NaNoWriMo . . . which is actually called National Novel Writing Month . . . which should ACTUALLY be called International Novel Writing Month . . . which would be InNoWriMo….

I have derailed.  Let me start again.

November is almost over and so is that thing I’ve been doing.  What have I been doing?  Writing a novel.  Or, specifically, working towards 50,000 words of a novel, which is the goal of NaNoWriMo.  Believe it or not, I WON!  Won = reached 50k words before Dec. 1.

A few years ago, I wrote my longest piece of fiction ever.  It clocked in at ALMOST 8,000 words.  That’s it.  And I worked about a week on it.  But this November, I cranked out over 52,000 words!  And not just words, but most of them are really good, I think.  Heck, you’d probably even recognize most of them.  I’ve seen them many other places and I bet you have too.

All kidding aside, I’m really happy and proud of my story.  During the writing process, I have actually teared up twice from the story.  There are some really sad parts.  But I promise to those of you who will one day read it, there are happy parts too.

As far as one day reading it, this WILL happen!  My aim was a little different than some others for NaNo.  I wasn’t just writing 50k words or writing a book, I was writing a novel that I hope to publish someday.  How is that different than others?  Well, I met a lot of people who were writing fan-fiction, which is where you write using characters and places already established by another writer.  Imagine a book about Harry Potter that wasn’t written by J.K. Rowling.  OR a book about characters in Rowling’s universe, but NOT Harry or Ron or Hermoine.  Imagine a book about Cho.  Or Twilight fan-fic.  No, not that.  Let’s think about Cho again.  *sigh*  How old would Cho be now? 1

Back on track: the thing about fan fiction is, you can’t sell it.  JoRo owns the rights to all the characters in the Harry Potter universe, and she hasn’t given you permission to use them, and will sue your ass if you try.  Same goes for Star Wars, or Twilight, or Tolkien, or Superfudge.  (That’s right, I just challenged someone to write Superfudge fan-fic!)

Anyway, the point I was trying to make is, I’d like to sell my novel.  And the books to follow, because I realized early on that this was going to be, if not a series, at least two books.  Do I expect to make Stephen King-money?  No.  Do I expect to make $5.  Yes.  I am certain I will make $5, even if I have to ask my Dad to buy it.  Whether I go the traditional publishing route or  the self-publishing Kindle, Nook, PDF, route I don’t know.  But I do know it’s a damn good story and I’m a damn good . . . above-mediocre writer.

But I’m not done.  November is winding down, and although I’ve passed 50k (is it 50k or 50K?), I’ve still got quite a bit to write.  The way the story is outlined, I feel it will clock in around 85-90,000 words.

So here’s my request for you guys: stay on me about this!  Ask me what my word count is.  Ask me how the story is coming along.  Indulge me if I keep shouting out my word count.  Because soon this will all be over and I’ll start editing, which I promise will be done in the closet.  No shouting there.

And thanks so much for the support, everyone.  I can’t believe how many people have stood behind me during this.  Other writers I know, people I’ve never met except online, people I’ve only met because of NaNo, friends, my Constant Reader (you know who you are, Dennys!), and most importantly, Judith.  I couldn’t have done this without her beside me.  Or, to be more exact, without her across the room from me.  She had to endure countless interruptions of, “Guess what I just had a character do!” and “Listen to this!”  She also had to endure a LOT of Brian Eno being played.  Specifically, “Music for Airports.”  Thank you, Judith.  I couldn’t have done this without you.  I love you  🙂


1 = Cho would be 32. Wow. (Source)

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Big News of Awesomeness

April 19, 2011 at 12:12 am (Fiction) (, , , )

I’ve been bouncing around the idea of turning my short story “The Carnival” into a novel for a while now (I’d usually link to it here, but I’m posting from my phone. It’s the Future now!). The final push I needed came the other day and now I have actually started going through the text, seeing places where I can expand the story, add characters, get into their minds, dive into backstory, etc.

My biggest question for myself had been, “How do I actually physically go about this? Do I open the file and just start adding to it?” After a long time of talking out loud to my sounding board (a drowsy cat), I realized I was focusing too much on trying to keep the polished work from the original in the first draft of the new work. I just need to start telling the story and THEN worry about, “Did I get that one really poetic description in there?” Write a crappy first draft just to get the story down, then polish.

Now that I’ve got that mental struggle figured out, I guess it’s just time to start writing this baby. No excuses now. All I ask is that you all, my Constant Readers, help keep me on track. I’ll do my best to post some of what I’m writing here, but if you think too much time has passed between talking about it, call me out. Let me know you want updates. I’m going to be setting some deadlines for myself, but if I also know I have an expectant audience, I’ll work harder not to let you down.

Wish me luck!

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The Start of… Something

April 12, 2011 at 1:14 am (Books, Fiction) (, , , , )

I recently started a new story and for the first time EVER, I feel like it could lead to being a novel.  I usually write short stories and occasionally longer short stories, but for some reason, the scope and possibilities I have opened up before me with this one seem, well, bigger.

I once wrote a story about a guy who made a set of tap shoes for a cockroach.  I wrote a story about a guy stuck working in Wisconsin who wishes he could dream about the girl he left behind in North Carolina, but keeps having silly dreams instead.  I wrote a story about a guy who is making a cross country trip and finds himself talking to a hand puppet in a motel in Wyoming.  None of these needed to be longer.  They told the story I wanted them to, quickly and easily.  The short story format was perfect for them.

Then there was “Into the Black” and “The Carnival.”  The former could easily be the beginning of a book.  The latter could very well be fleshed out with a few more characters added and end up being a book of its own (both of which are ideas I have been toying with).

But this new piece that I started…well, it is already apparent to me that it belongs in a big world.  A wide open place where many things happen.  A place where the protagonist is on a quest.  This is all VERY obvious to me.  The problem?  I don’t know what that quest is!  I don’t know the “what if.”  Without sounding flippant, good novels can be thought of (though not summarized) in concise “what if” questions.  “What if Childe Roland was a gunslinger making his way to The Tower?”* “What if a magical ring needs to be destroyed in enemy territory?”**  “What if a retired man’s mind is beginning to slip and he wants to keep it a secret?”*** 

My newest piece starts right after a battle, the final battle of a war, and the prince commanding the losing side is the only person still alive from his troops, but no one knows he has lived through it.  Sounds OK, right?  He then meets a guy who is scavenging the bodies of the fallen soldiers and he lies about who he is, knowing that his enemies have won and are now in control of his former city.  Again, sounds all right.  But that’s where I’ve been stopped.  For three days now.  Because I have no “what if” for this guy.  What’s his quest?  To regain control of his city?  Sure! …except I know so little about politics and intrigue that I don’t know if I could do that.  If it was an Item Quest, well, somehow a tangible goal seems much “easier,” but I haven’t figured out what he would be questing after in the situation that was created.  I am a firm believer in what Stephen King talks about in his book “On Writing,” mainly: create the situation, create the characters and don’t worry about plot, it will come as the characters try to resolve their situation.  But guess what?  I ain’t Stephen King.  (Actually, you probably didn’t even have to guess that.)  I feel like I should have SOME sort of idea as to where they are headed… even if they never get there.  Right now I’ve got, “What if the former prince of a nation……….umm….”

Anyway, bear with me.  I feel like this story and my quest to tackle it are going to be with me for a little while.

*= The Dark Tower series
**= The Lord of the Rings
***= A Spot of Bother

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Happy 2000+!

March 3, 2010 at 8:50 pm (Fiction) (, , , , )

With my laptop down for the past two months, there were a lot of sites that I have in my Bookmarks that were kinda “out of sight, out of mind.”  One of them was Feedbooks.  I happened to look at the site last night and realized my book “Into the Black” was up to 2,045 downloads.  This makes me vur-ry happy!  The odd thing is, not  single person has commented on it.  Part of it, I think has to do with the site itself.  You download a book, put it on your electronic reader, and then really never have to go back to that author’s site again, if you don’t remember to.

Anyway, I’m happy.  I figure if even just half the people who downloaded it read it, then that’s over A THOUSAND readers!  It may not sound like much to people like Stephen King or Neil Gaiman, but for little ol’ me, I’ll take it  🙂

Remember, you can download my books for free by following this link!

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Download my books for free

December 20, 2009 at 4:13 pm (Life) (, )

At current time of writing (3:09 PM, Sunday, Dec. 20), my books have a total download of 709. This makes me muy, muy happy. Feliz, even 🙂

You, too, can download my book, “Into the Black” and its prequel, “The Carnival,” HERE!

Please, please pass this link onto anyone you know who likes to read. Thanks!

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